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This really wrestles with todays problems. You are not afraid to mention, straight up, the worlds problems. This poem is good, because it lets us know what is wrong with ...

This is really good! I also find a close relation to it. Life does seem truly monotonous at times. However, I'm sure it will get better over time. Once you ...

This is good. But, I also agree that your character is somewhat bland. Make some changes to make her a bit more original. However, you do have the works for ...

Alright, so I thought you did an excellent job with description here. You painted a very clear picture in my mind. I also liked the fact that you threw the ...

Alright. The first thing that I noticed is a lack of description. While you do a good job describing the dragon, the piece lacks a background description of the setting, ...

This is really good. I really liked the fact that Drake doesn't remember his past. It allows us to learn more about him as he discovers new things about himself. ...

Well, I'm certainly not going to be as harsh as the first person who reviewed this. Everyone has to start somewhere, and the only way to get better is by ...

will do. and thanks for the review

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Chapter 1 One shot to the face was all it took to send him sprawling onto the hard blacktop. Blood seeped out of a cut below his lip, and he ...

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You know those old fashioned stories about babies being left on other peoples doorsteps by their parents because they No need to repeat parents can't take care of them for ...

Leaving a place you liked was never easy. I looked around the tiny apartment that had been my home for so long. The brown marble floor looked clean enough, the ...

Hey! Thanks in advance. It's an essay expressing my idealism towards modern man and society.