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Hello there :) Since you're relatively new, welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here. Looks as if you haven't had any reviews done yet, so you better get ...

Hello there :) I felt I had to review this because I don't think I've ever read any of your work. So, here I am :) I'll first off start ...

'Elo there dogs :) Now you have to know, I quit poetry a while ago and so I've kind of lost touch on how to review poems. But since I ...

Hello there :) First of all, Amen sister! You took the words right out of my mouth. I'm constantly denying it, but being single sucks sometimes. 5% makes a huuuuge ...

Hello there :) I finally made it. So my comments will sort of match the ones I made for the first chapter as everything is pretty much still the same. ...

Hello there :) Sorry I'm late, I just saw your request...thank you for requesting my services (: I'll begin my highlighting any problem areas I should come across. "Can't. Phones ...

Hello there :) Remember me? I'm really sorry about my poor services, it's a long story as to why I'm terribly late! But moving and no internet play a big ...

Hello there :) Sorry I'm a little late, I only just saw your request. I remember walking out of that horrid place holding a receipt for the filling of two ...

Hello once again...:) I would give you a thorough review, but I'll be logging off soon. I really like, first of all the approach you took when writing this story; ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) "I can't remember," I said sadly and the girl smiled and spoke. Firstly, in dialogue you should not follow a character's speech with ...

Hello there :) A great veil of fog was swept across the expanse of the sky, shrouding everything beneath its wing in darkness. The clouds and sea bled together as ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) She tried cover herself in the warmth of the bed, He couldn’t feel comfortable though, something was missing. Diana moaned quietly within the ...

Hello there :) The shades were pulled, the lights were dimmed, and the gathered kids fell silent as the huge plasma screen lit up and cute penguins started wobbling hither ...

Hello there :) My pencil creases the paper, and my hand hurts like a bitch (comma) but there's no way in hell I'm giving up. After hours of writing, my ...

Hello there :) (Off the record, are you a Mika fan?) You see, this man was no ordinary man. An ordinary man had a wife, two children, and either ran ...