User avatar

zeppy♥yozora

  • Fantasy Novels Re: Other Side of the Looking Glass Intro and Prologue

    Once upon a time there was a boy named Iitsuka Sorana II (Eats/Kah_Soh/Rah/Nah). His father, Iitska Sorana I, was the King of a place named Kuushiika (Koo/Sh/Kah). When Iitsuka was ...

    May 10, 2008
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: Harry & Hermione HP Fanfiction (Ch. 1)

    i liked it yay :D :D :D

    Apr 27, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: teens

    great job :D

    Apr 27, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Dido's Sonnet

    This was pretty good, a little confusing though and i think The Fates has sealed my life is supposed to be the fates have sealed my life, im not sure ...

    Apr 27, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: I once had a cat named Sammi

    lol scary part is she actually did smile at me once... in fact she teleported on numerous occasions...not joking

    Apr 19, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Ballad Of Maryling And Christian

    some parts were repetitive lovers not meant for this world and it didnt really flow... but other than that it was good! :)

    Apr 19, 2008
  • Randomosity Re: Original Quote

    "The one lesson almost everyone learns, but almost every one misunderstands is love" --original

    Apr 18, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Love Gone Forever

    HOYL CRAP!!!! THATS__WOW!! jeese that was really goooD!!! jsut the right balance of love and sadness! :D :D :D :D :D

    Apr 18, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Dreamer's Reality

    wow... this reminds me of something Edgar Allen Poe would write (that is a good thing) :D

    Apr 18, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: I once had a cat named Sammi

    I have a cat named Sammi. Some people say she is as gentle as Bambi. I for one disagree, I think she has it out for me. I woke with ...

    Apr 17, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Gay Teenage Romance Story

    WOW!!!! This is very VERY good!!! It is well written and, well, imaginative.. The only mistakes you made were "I had football practise" (you spelled PRATICE wrong) and "10o’clock" (supopsed ...

    Apr 17, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Dejection

    dang!! this is really good! very sad and depressing ... i like it! 8)

    Apr 16, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Painting Memories (Poem)

    I used to have a memory like a picture in my mind. An artists painting of the family and friends I left behind, But now the picture is starting to ...

    Apr 16, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: A Clean Bite--Chapter 1 part 1

    YAY gewd story :D

    Apr 16, 2008
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Hell Of College- Chapter 1

    at the beginning it kinda seems like u keep forgetting that you were writing in the 1st person... 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) Now for a very Nikki like remark.....(note ...

    Apr 15, 2008


In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit. Not a nasty, dirty, wet hole, filled with the ends of worms and an oozy smell, nor yet a dry, bare, sandy hole with nothing in it to sit down on or to eat: it was a hobbit-hole, and that means comfort.
— JRR Tolkien