zencherry

Symbolic, deep, and creepy. Love it! I think it flowed well, and you did a really good job describing and explaining details. That's one of the things that make a ...

Cool! I like the vibe and atmosphere it gave me. I do think you can improve on your grammar and flow a little. Describe emotions and feelings in more vivid, ...

La, la, la....la....things are A-OK

Note: This is a description of a panic attack/night terror. Please critique and share any ideas or dislikes! Thanks... Luna woke up in a cold sweat, screaming. Disturbing images spilled ...

Very classy...

Wow, that was amazing! I love stories like that. I love the pain and the sadness and the deep underlying message. You nailed it!

I love how you referr to the zombies (or the creatures) as "feeders." I am excited to read the next chapter of this story!

Very cool...this almost captures the emotions I have towards our society today. We could have more! But most of us walk around numb and ignorant to amazing experiences and rich, ...

Alice lay down on the razor sharp grass, as it cut her back. She looked up at the sky. It was a peculiar shade of purple. Alice was used to ...