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Re: Free Fall
great i really like this verse but there is no refuge in imagination; you live there, too, black to my orange, opal to my blue nothingness. At the golden pinnacle ...
Feb 23, 2006 -
Re: The day of a life and life of a day.
it's great i really like the verse You know evening is the day, that the teens are now adults. Colleges offer jobs that pay, yearn of families not far away. ...
Feb 13, 2006 -
Re: S.S. Friendship
that's wicked i really like this verse Look, Stop, Right there behind you. Can't you see you're not wanted here? An unwelcome stranger, Crossing the gate, You should've stayed on ...
Feb 13, 2006 -
Re: Choking on Steel Tires
very intresting i really like this bit To alley cat, hissing and witty All enchanted with titty Bitty pieces of the heart Piled and taken on a cart To a ...
Feb 13, 2006 -
Re: Working Fire at a Mill
:shock: that's amazing i like the verse The fire’s licking tongues Cast whispers without tune And they’ve caught me in the darkness Where the garish marks that make me beautiful ...
Feb 13, 2006 -
Re: Apple Juice and Condensation
i like the It’s bittersweet, the way they taste Too often much like blood And though bleeding life breeds far more pain Than it does of over The remedy’s in ...
Feb 13, 2006 -
Re: Recess
:shock: amazing. if you keep this up you will probably be in the top ten for poets. Please spell check your posts before submitting them, and try to use correct ...
Feb 13, 2006
