zankoku_na_tenshi

Yay, finally here to write a review! XD Always glad to read more FLT. This chapter was great—certainly not as bad as you seem to think it was. ^_^ I ...

Woohoo, next chapter! I think this one was also really well-written; you did a good job of revealing just enough information, without giving too much away and without infodumping on ...

Hi there! See, I told you I’d get to it. XD This is, in my opinion, considerably better. I really liked the previous opening, but I agree with you that ...

Okay! Sorry it took so long to get this read for you—I’ve been a little busy. Well… that certainly was wacky. It was interesting, and I liked a lot of ...

Hi there! Always glad to read more of your writing. ^_^ Once again, I really liked the little details of description you used to show us your setting through the ...

Hello there! Once again, my apologies on the brief delay between reviews. The plot thickens! I’m glad to see you’ve added more characters to the equation, just because with your ...

Alrighty! Sorry this is a little late—now that the SATs are over, I should be more punctual. XD Once again, an amazing chapter. I always really enjoy your work, as ...

OK! First chapter, here we go. First of all, that was a really intriguing and well-written start. I really think your opening did a good job of capturing your character’s ...

Hi!! Okay, this review might be a little rushed, because our internet is going to go down in about 15 minutes, so if I don’t get this done on time, ...

Hi there! I don’t think I’ve seen you around—I’m Zan, nice to meet you. ^_^ Wow, this was a really well-written first chapter. I think you did a very good ...

Hey there! Look at me, being all on time and stuff! XD Definitely an impressive start here—Your narrator is a really easy character to like and feel for, and I’m ...

Hi there! Wow, this was quite a start. The first half set up the characters really well, and second half especially did a good job setting up the atmosphere—there was ...

D: Aw, c’mon now. It’s not as bad as all that. In fact, it’s pretty good. ^_^ Maybe not your strongest chapter, but still pretty well done. I really like ...

Hey there! Sorry I was so late in getting to this chapter, I’ve just been so busy of late… XD God, I’m tired. In any case, at least I’m here ...

Hi there! Sorry this is a bit late, real-life and school-life have both been intruding a little on my writing life. XD Actually, my reviews might get a little sparser ...