zankoku_na_tenshi

Hi there! I’m Zan. Looks like you’re several chapters ahead of me, but I liked your title so much I had to check this out. XD I’ve been trying to ...

I’m still here, and ready for another wonderful chapter! This was as brilliant as ever, and I’m glad for the chance to read it. On to the critique, I suppose, ...

Looking at other people’s reviews of this story, I’ve realized what I’ve been writing for you has been pretty much useless drivel. XD It makes me feel awful, especially since ...

*waves* Okay, here I am. ^_^ This was quite good! It’s always really fun to hear more about the characters, and I was looking forward to hearing more about Jyuna’s ...

Hey there! I’m back for chapter five, as promised. BTW, congratulations on becoming an instructor, that’s amazing! ^_^ Anyway, I really enjoyed Nendo’s and Darian’s interaction in this chapter

Hi there! Here I am at last. XD I know what you mean about chapters that are just kind of there because they have to be there, but I don’t ...

Hey there! Sorry, I would have been here sooner, I just didn’t see that the chapter was up. I actually really liked this chapter—it was good development, I thought, for ...

I am so sorry I left this so late… I got busy with JulNoWriMo (which I am now 5k behind on… >_>) and biology homework as soon as I got ...

Augh, once again, I’m a bad reviewer. XD I just really hope this reaches you before you leave… I actually really like this chapter—I think it gives us just enough ...

GAH, late again. I can’t really excuse myself about being busy so much as “tired and apathetic” so… well, I’m sorry. XD I’m not a good reviewer. But we know ...

Hey there! I’m here to do some reviewing! (finally) Always glad to read more of TEoT, it just keeps getting more interesting. (Also, any chapter that introduces more of your ...

OKAY. This time, at least, I have a legit excuse—I’m at a five week summer program at U of A. I only just got my computer back, and the dumb ...

Hey there! I’m back, and somewhat punctual this time! Who would have thought! I really like the change in perspective in this chapter, it helps to develop Noora’s character which ...

Ah! Forgive me, I didn’t even know this was online! I really like how you’re developing your world and characters here—you do a good job of hinting at things and ...

Hey! I’m finally here! XD Okay, let's get right to the story. ^_^ You did a really excellent job with characters, as ever—I really like your characterizations of Nendo and ...