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Hello, pinkangel! Zan is here as promised. : ) I have to say that I really, really like Asha. Her plight just makes it really easy for me to feel ...

Hi, ultraviolet! I’m here as promised. : ) This is another chapter that I quite like. It was pretty interesting to see the consequences of what happened in the previous ...

And hello again, lunahlove. Sorry I’m late—it’s been quite a week. Anyway! This was another interesting chapter, and I really like the developments here. It was really kind of neat ...

Hi papersolstice! I’m Zan, and I’ll be your reviewer for today. Ok, first things first, your question: You can’t really indent paragraphs on YWS, so its easiest to just hit ...

Hi again, ultraviolet! I’m back for the second part. : ) The first thing I noticed in this chapter is that I really like how your narrative voice is developing. ...

Hi there, ultraviolet! I’m Zan, here to review~! First of all, I really like the concept behind this story so far! One thing you do really well is manage to ...

Hi again, lunahlove! I really like this second chapter very much, it gets the plot moving forward very quickly while introducing a little bit more of Leander’s world and her ...

Hi there, Legendaryrose! We meet again. : ) How are you? I really enjoyed the previous two chapters, and I must say that I really like this one as well. ...

Hi there, lunahlove! I’m Zan. ^_^ I know you’ve gotten good, detailed reviews already (Snoink is pure reviewing love), but I liked the concept of this story, so I thought ...

Hi again, Legendaryrose! Thought I’d stop by and drop you a review. ^_^ This was another pretty interesting chapter, I like how it revealed more about the world of your ...

Hi again, Attolia! Wow, I really enjoyed this chapter. The first chapter was excellent already, but this one sealed the deal—I will definitely be returning to read chapter three! Again, ...

Hi there, LegendaryRose! I’m Zan, it’s nice to meet you. ^_^ I liked your title, and your summary seemed interesting, so I thought maybe I’d stop by and leave you ...

Hello! I’m Zan, I don’t think we’ve met? Anyway, I thought I’d stop by and take a look at this story here. : ) Looks like you’ve already got a ...

Ahoy! Once again, this is a great chapter for introducing and building up these character’s personalities. I really do like Eve, she seems like the sort of character who is ...

Hi, there, carden! I’m Zan. I liked the synopsis of your story a lot and I thought I’d stop by—I love historical fiction and I used to read a lot ...