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Well, I'm no great judge of lyrics, in fact, I'm no judge of lyrics at all. I couldn't write poetry if my life depended on it. XD But this sounds ...

Wow. That was a really good story, beautiful and sad. I can't think of anything to say for critique, really. I loved the characterization, the atmosphere, everything about it. Wow. ...

Hm... not bad, but there's room for improvement, too. I like the way your characters are shaping up, but I feel like things are going way, way to fast. There's ...

Interesting! I like hearing more about the world and your main character. I wasn't quite sold on Veronica before, but she seems like a quite likable character. I liked what ...

Definitely interesting, I'm very much enjoying this story. I like how you told part of the story from Seuja's POV, letting us hear his side of the story. Hm.... I'm ...

Well, that was an interesting development. I'm quite curious to hear more about these Commena, and I like how you're starting to work with your main character a little more. ...

Wow. Really... wow. That was very, very well written. You did an excellent job building up your characters and introducing the storyline. The character development already made and the backstory ...

HAHA! REVENGE OF THE BOOKWORM!! Nice one, this was fun to read. You've got one heck of a talent for characterization. I can't wait to see what happens next. Some ...

I read it all. ^_^ It was quite good, actually. I like the world you created for your characters, it feels unique and interesting. I was especially intrigued by your ...

Ooh, nice job. You've got quite a grasp on writing fight scenes, something I've always struggled with. It was interesting and pulled me in. The problem is, it was a ...

Oooh, this is getting even more interesting. Your main character is starting to stand out a little more, I feel like I know him a little better, which is good. ...

I like this a lot! You did a nice job with the imagery, you made it seem very... real, very believable. I was pulled into the description from the beginning. ...

Hm... certainly interesting, I like your idea. The idea of the book that the protagonist can't remember is an intriguing one, to be sure. I'd like to hear what happens ...

Wow. This is brilliant work, especially considering it's a rough draft. I love the unique, interesting fantasy creatures, the wisp especially. It's powers and description were like nothing I'd ever ...

I admit I really have no idea what I'm talking about, being no great writer myself, but I quite like this prologue. I can somewhat see why some people are ...