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The glorious resolve- The heart cried for a soul but there is no one to hear it's cry. The glorious flag stands true, And no more can we be deaf ...

Is there anything left to say ? I believe your poem itself has said everything that it is worth :D An amazing piece and the best part is that you ...

Ok. So this is a kind of inspirational poem and It was really good. By the way It seems like a true story :P so yeah If I make any ...

A coin with a hole Isn't used. A card with no number. Is left aside. A soldier with a bullet hole Is just a pawn overly used. Dear jane, I ...

Hi :D Ok well this, is a good poem. There are a lot of things that I couldn't get, firstly what's the poem about ? I cant seem to figure ...

Dear friend,good ol' friend We've had a good run and all good things must end. I have naught to give you 'cept a blessing or two Oh lord! bless you. ...

Best one I've read over here :D Really nicely scripted, you didn't need any fancy adjectives or even colors to light up the poem. The sheer truth that you define ...

Awesomely scripted, ok first things first, I adore the poem a lot but It doesn't speak out like your other poems, I think that's because it still lacks some color. ...

Wow. I'm stunned, I've always thought that a writers true skill lies always in how he picks up the reader and makes the reader feel the exact emotions that you ...

How do I start my sorry tale I know not When will this curse end I know not Oh the brutality, Oh the brutes Who stole our days of freedom ...

The theme rocks. It's awesome, really now. Secondly, the language, the color, the questions all rock. I'm mostly not into these kind of topics but i dont know what kept ...

Ok this is a good, no great piece of writing. The word '' philosophy '' is rightly used here, because it is one. I had to retrace upward again and ...

There walked a man of the past on a road leading to somewhere not known. The world baffled him, It was not as it was, as if As if ,Something ...

I really like this effort of yours. :) You've done well here but there seem to be some short comings. Firstly, write more , a little poem like this is ...

Very nicely done. The start was superb ! but the second stanza missed out a bit , though the rest made up for it. There's also a small grammatical mistake. ...