zackattack

Beautiful, you created a world that seems interesting, it's one I want to get lost in, which i rare for me, it could use maybe a little more of a ...

Beautiful, it's a story you can visualize in your head. Wonderful!

Long ago, I had known, Love, Into the sorrow of my heart, There you stand, How can a soul so gentle, Hurt, I know you never meant to harm me, ...

This is very interesting, it makes inspired, you are very good, try to use more description to show more of an epic/dramatic effect.

This is interesting, although it makes me wonder what the story is behind it, while reading i couldn't help but hear a slow moving piano, i believe that would cause ...