zackattack

I see you Through foggy glass, This window that seperates us, My hand upon it. As you lay asleep I ponder, Wondering how this could be? The disease that cintrols ...

It seemed incomplete to me like you skipped a big part, discuss how the speaker feels about the situation, this will help the character develop into someone we can see ...

This may have not been an original poem, but it's a poem none the less, all ideas come from an existing one, it was a nice sweet poem, if you ...

I really liked this poem, the first stanza was choppy which have problems with myself, I liked how it was a story but at the same time itr was some ...

Unknown Nights shadow slowly fades away As the shore of the beach contracts, The white moon over head Shows it's bright smile to me, My ruptured reflection in water How ...

I love this poem to death it seems like the cold has a great effect on your writing! lol. Every stanza has a certain effect, which your writing style complements, ...

Dark and mysterious, I found it very interesting, you made it seem as though you were the angel of destiny or the grim reaper, this was something different, I got ...

Not many people write like this anymore, I find it refreshing, at first I was some what confused and it seemed as though the more I read the more I ...

Thanks for the advice! It's very helpful, i wrote this in a matter of a couple of minutes, I like to call it raw, simply because of that. When i ...

Into that good night By: Zackary Turner It was night; we were alone, in this house, built with my grandfather’s last string of sanity. The soft glow of the fire ...

A nice poem, a little confusing until then end, but that's always good when your writing from the heart because the hear is confusing, I like that there is no ...

This poem was amazing, it left a lasting impression and made me think. I love your allusion to the Cheshire cat from Alice in wonderland, that was perfect, not many ...

Don't listen to the replies that are downing you poem I found it wonderful, you don't get to see much of that these days, keep up the good work, your ...

This was inteeresting, although you shouldn't use random capitalization, the noodles part made me laugh, it seemed like it just doesn't belong, this was nice and sweet, I'm looking forward ...

It flowed pretty well, if you didn't mean for it to then ignore the last comment, simple, sweet, and most of powerful, when it's read the right way it can ...