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Re: Records and Rain
Oh wow, I absolutely loved this. I'm usually not one for poetry, but I fell in love with this poem from beginning to end. I really liked your use of ...
Dec 16, 2012 -
Re: Hide and Seek Ch. 1
I really like this story! :) 1. I feel like there is something really bad behind Nico (I'm getting that kind of vibe) 2. The characters are made up well. ...
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: Deleted
Cliffie! Good, I want to read more. I want to know why they ran away in the first place. As well as, why they don't want to go east, towards ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Motel 66 (chapter 1)
Ok, so here are a few things. 1. I like the setting you've created (creepy and kind of scary) 2. I like that you used a lot of descriptions. It ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Exile's Blade (chapter one- Reunion)
I have to agree that within eight months they should be kind of close. Although otherwise, I like the plot (though I know you want to change that). The characters ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Vanish - Chapter 1
Ok, so I'm kind of new at this, but I'm going to do what other's are doing. 1. I love the beginning. The first sentence got me hooked. 2. You ...
Jan 11, 2011