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I really like this story! :) 1. I feel like there is something really bad behind Nico (I'm getting that kind of vibe) 2. The characters are made up well. ...

It definitely looks like Skandar Keynes. :) It looks amazing Demeter!!! It would have taken me more than one night to draw something like that.

Hello! Yes I am a newbie here. My name is Jamie and I love to write (who doesn't?) I also read a lot and is often called nerdy (not that ...

Thanks Mazey! ^_^ And yes, maybe it is a little cliche. I'll get right on that. Thanks again. Ok so yep, I fixed it. :)

Cliffie! Good, I want to read more. I want to know why they ran away in the first place. As well as, why they don't want to go east, towards ...

Ok, so I'm a little new at this. Anyway, this is the prologue of my new story called Desdomna. It's kind of short, but I promise the chapters will be ...

Ok, so here are a few things. 1. I like the setting you've created (creepy and kind of scary) 2. I like that you used a lot of descriptions. It ...

I have to agree that within eight months they should be kind of close. Although otherwise, I like the plot (though I know you want to change that). The characters ...

Ok, so I'm kind of new at this, but I'm going to do what other's are doing. 1. I love the beginning. The first sentence got me hooked. 2. You ...