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Hahaha! FUNNY! :) Doctors do that to me all the time.... :mrgreen: :smt003 :smt004 :smt002 :smt001 :smt005 :elephant: :lol: :P :D :) :o :) ~HONEY~ P.S. :D :) :o :elephant: ...

I'm not that nitpicky so all I have to say is I LOVED IT! I'm not the lovey dovey person some ppl are, but this was VERY good! :) :smt003 ...

This is my first poem ever that I've ever actually worked on so pl. don't be harsh! They pretend to be lovers When surrounded by others They say I love ...

Thanks for the advice Stella I'll make a revised one soon! :)

Thanks so much but I'd like to point out that I wanted the girl to have that huge change bc the dream was supposed to be happy so I wanted ...

Personally I think this is great and I also understand it should be a bit vague since it's in a six-year-old's POV but maybe expand a little more but other ...

Dried tears lay on my face after the chemotherapy...the pain was immense. Dad was twining my last strand of hair through his fingers with his comforting smoky gray eyes looking ...

I sorta rushed through with this one so it isn't my best...and I was lazy about the italicizing so hehe yes but anyways I'm revising it so thanks for everything...don't ...

Thanks for the comment! And I noticed that! I was just really hyped to be writing! Writing's a passion and I sometimes just get like WOOO! But thanks for the ...

Move! What are you doing, idiot??!! MOVE ALREADY! You try to listen to your mind but fear has taken over your body. You see the car moving towards you like ...