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Okay I took away both stanzas..I really didn't like them either and weRe confused about them. When I say a broken heart I'm talking about that sad feeling you get ...

Thanks again guys! And also it really is just a love for writing! :D

The wind seperates a seed and its flower, Lifting the seed with all its mighty power. As the seed and flower slowly drift apart, they look deep inside, and find ...

Hey pshhxhoney! Okay I believe this poem has great potential and the rhymes are great! There is one nitpick though. Well, the rhythm of the poem is..hmmm...awkward? If you added ...

Oh my gosh thank you so much for that review nativecatcher! :) And everyone else too! :D

Sorry...I wanted a nice rhyme! :) I changed it though!

This is not really something I worked on for a long time. Just something for pleasure :) A poem a day keeps the sadness away. My daily prescription is just ...

'Ello! I'd just like to say that your descriptions and everything were awesome! IMAGERY! :) I loved it!

I really do like this beginning a lot! It's very good and your descriptions mesmerize me! :) Keep up the good work! ~NinjaTOtheM@X~

I see the monster in his eyes. The look was one of deep despise. Every minute he starts to roar, Unleashing the fury within his core. The abuse becomes physical. ...

Thanks GUYS! :)

I'm not really an expert on poems but I love this poem :) Keep it up! :)

fixed! :)

Thanks and sorry about the smiley....I just couldn't resist :)

As I take my last breath, I reminisce on precious times, but I regret all my life mistakes As I take my last breath, I think of what I'm leaving, ...