yubbies21

That was wonderful! Your character is a very take-charge kind of person, very bright, very strong. A real unique character. You showed a lot of her emotions, good job. Without ...

Interesting. I had heard about Shino's serial contest, but wasn't brave enough to join. I haven't read anything from it yet, so this will be interesting as I said, quite ...

Hello there! Hope you are having a wonderful day! I am, do you know why? It's review Day! I haven't reviewed any of your work before, and not very many ...

Hello! It's me, stepping out of my comfort zone again to review yet another chapter...:D Wish me luck! I love the banter the two characters have going, Julian and Edmund, ...

This is so darkly amazing, I was crying by the end. I can't believe how much emotion you put into this. It's just over-flowing with juicy description and wonderful sentence ...

I fell in love with the way you started this, with all of those statements. It just make it sound so amazing! The way you ended this chapter is perfect, ...

Hello! I haven't reviewed many novel chapters before, so this is a learning process for me! I noticed quite a few grammar mistakes, just small things, but I'm positive that ...

Hello! I haven't read an of your work before, but looking at this small section, I can see that you are excellent and have talent. I also am not good ...

Hello! Oh, an Article! I haven't done one of those before! Why not? You have a very strong beginning, a real attention getter! I was confused for a second, but ...

Hello Deanie! This peaked my interest... I haven't reviewed too many essays before, so this is a little bit out of my comfort zone...But I'm giving it my best shot! ...

Hello! This is yubbies21, A squire looking to accomplish her 10th Green Room Review to become a knight. There are many creative words and phrases used in this poem, giving ...

Hello emjayc! Guess who it is? It's me! Squire Yubbies reporting for duty! I like it. I really do. It's simplistic and meaning full, all in a few short words. ...

Hello capriciouscoralyn! It's Squire Yubbies here to vanquish this Green Room Piece! I really liked this poem. I love it when authors just string bits and pieces together to make ...

Hey CrystalPony21! This is a really nice poem! It could use a few touch ups, but you have amazing talent! It states everything clearly and decisively. It doesn't flow as ...

Hello! It's Squire Yubbies here to review this poem today! I'm sure this poem has an even deeper meaning for you, deeper than I'm able to grasp. It's beautiful in ...