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Looking from above I see fires, burning like stars. The rot of humanity fill my nose, choking me. Battle cries are loud, but these are monumental. Of all of the ...

People are so easily broken, Their thoughts are muddled. When we hear the whispers of rebellion our thoughts shift, we change our motives and what we live for. There are ...

Chapter One Stranger And Stranger (Sorry for the shortness and the grammar) "Good morning!," I said cheerfully as I bobbed down the spiral staircase," Hey mom, when I'm done with ...

i didnt really like it because a ghost and a computer dont fit in my mind. try again

i really liked this. it sounded like she was a god to me. you have a real talent. i have no interest in poetry but this really caught my attention

i really liked it but i didn't know what it was about. use more descriptive words please. keeep writing more

I like how deep this was. It caught my attention but did not seem overly flamboiyant. keep posting, but work on your punctuation. I like poetry but i am sadly ...

whoever reads this book this is the creator. im trying as hard as i can if my grammar is wrong forgive me please and i hope you like this. also ...

Prologue My body ached all over, but regardless I just kept running. I didn't know what was following me but from the glimpse that I caught of it the thing ...

This is an extremely good story. I liked how you didn't take time to explain who she was and what she was like you just let it flow. You might ...