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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Bad things don't happen in the daylight

    Hey there! I loved the way you wrote the story. You're only 14 but you show a lot of angst and derision at the way society is, and it's quite ...

    Jun 27, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Lovers. Fighters. Friends.

    Hello! I really liked the flow of the story. You built it up nicely, first talking about the frame of mind the m.c. is in, and then delving into why ...

    Jun 27, 2011


You'd better wise up, Pony... you get tough like me and you don't get hurt. You look out for yourself and nothing can touch you, man.
— Dallas Winston, The Outsiders