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  • Poetry » General, Dramatic
    Re: The Kind Boy

    One of the strengths of this piece lies in its ability to evoke deep emotions through its imagery and language. The use of metaphors, such as "the blade in my ...

    Apr 11, 2024

  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic
    Re: Forest Sunset

    Your description beautifully captures the intertwining of nature's beauty with the ethereal quality of music, particularly the song "Je Te Laisserai Des Mots." The imagery of a forest with towering ...

    Apr 11, 2024


  • Your poetry beautifully captures the wistful longing and ache of missing someone dearly. The imagery of blossoms erupting on the streets, symbolizing renewal and warmth, juxtaposed with the narrator's

    Apr 11, 2024


  • Your writing is incredibly evocative, painting a vivid picture of loss and nostalgia. It captures the bittersweet essence of returning to a place filled with memories of someone who is ...

    Apr 11, 2024

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
    Re: for "you"

    Your poem is a poignant exploration of the complexities inherent in human relationships, where desire and expectation often collide with reality. The repetition of "anything for you" underscores a sen

    Apr 11, 2024

  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical
    Re: Don't Frame Love

    I've seen a lot of poems but this one is the best. Your heartfelt words resonate deeply, echoing the complexities of love's journey. It's clear you're navigating uncharted waters, grappling ...

    Apr 11, 2024

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: unwittingly buried beneath mirth

    Hey, I'm here to leave my review! this was an amazing poem, the words you use to describe things and the topic is all so perfect and it fits together ...

    Feb 9, 2024


  • This has got to be my favorite poem. I love how you spaced things out and put things off to the side for a more unique effect. and I love ...

    Feb 9, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Supernatural
    Re: Marcia Blythe’s dear love: Part One

    took me a bit to read which is amazing and I LOVE THIS SO MUCH its my favorite on here. you did amazing on it and I love the characters ...

    Jan 23, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural
    Re: Midnight Witch x Y/N’s adventure: Part Two

    I love a fantasy book, overall this book was amazing I love the hard work put into it and it shows how much you have put into it. The characters ...

    Jan 18, 2024

  • Other » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Rain

    this is so amazing, I love the characters, and the work you put into it is astonishing. I hope you put another chapter in it and keep up this good ...

    Jan 17, 2024

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Kagiso - Chapter 9

    I have been reading this story a lot and I've gotten this far I love it, it is very interesting, and I love the setup of the book overall. you ...

    Oct 24, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Sinister Magick - Chapter 1: Reality

    I can't describe in words how much I love this, I can't wait to go into the story more, the setup, descriptions, and everything are just amazing. and I love ...

    Oct 24, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic
    Re: Siren’s Desire-Part Four

    This is a good book part 4 is amazing I hope to stick around for more parts. The book seems really interesting and it has a really good topic. I ...

    Oct 24, 2023

  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: The Slenderman

    This poem is amazing! I am a fan of creepy pastas and Slender Man is super cool in my opinion this poem can send chills down your spine its amazing ...

    Oct 21, 2023


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