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seen her in one of my visits to aunt matilda sweet and beautiful as the moon princess was she but deprived of all bounties lads of countryside fell in love ...

you're a very good writer.i can sense emotions in your writing actually,well to comment on your artwork,i've to read the prev. chapters.but by reading this,i can say that you can ...

you've a written a fine poetry!! i really appreciate your effort...!! but there are some mistakes that i want to point out. first of all,you don't need to put commas ...

this is an awesome piece of literary artwork adriana. and is this your first poem?? well you've done far better than a beginner.congratulations!! i just love this has an intense ...

yes i am i am...!! hell intersted..!!

prologue "i wished i have never done the word that i use first in the morning!! there are many things that all of us regret doing. all of us regret ...

ver very nice work....,u knw wt..,, "Dancing past the stars I will settle on mars"...this is my fav. line in the whole poem!! this poem actually conveys the message for ...

i think that the title is very relevant..and the plot the poem tells is indeed interesting. but still if you want to come up with a new title..you can have ...

umm...thank you for your feedback...!! and i'll keep that points in my head..!!:)

I took a deep breath and started walking towards the empty road It never seems to end broken dreams are never mend Life seems too short at times when we ...

your poem beautifully captures the feeling of alienation and fear when a happy go lucky,jolly kid enters teenage..!(at least that's what i understood) i didn't understand that "%u2019t" thing..,is it ...

first of all,,congratulations...! you've just wrote a very nice and beautiful poem..!!"i am a coward'....yes i am., everyone among us.,have behaved or acted like a coward in 1 point of ...

i think that this is a very nice poem...,,i liked it very much..,,although,to make it clear,one should read it twice..!! in my case,on the 1st time,it really bowled over my ...

ummm....,actually,thanks for improving it for me..,and you'll soon hear from me..!!again..!!

the awesomest short poem..,i have ever heard or read...!!the last line of the poem is very inspiring and beautiful..,,"happiness is my shield"..!!i bet it is..!! good luck...,you're awesome..!!