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Thank you for the review! At times I also had the impression that the whole thing was just an accident, that you did everything in italic. That seems like something ...

Makes sense. In a way, writing is like finding a balance, right? Too wordy isn't good, but too rushed isn't good either, so it's up to the writer to find ...

Thanks for the review! I think that also has to do with pacing. I thought it was good. You didn't cut anything short or drag it out too long in ...

About Gerhard being overprotective, I think it would be nice if you added a conscious thought from Tanya thinking he's being overprotective. also lol Tanya is a knight in her ...

Sounds epic! :P

Thanks for the review! There's one character that I was most excited about and remembered particularly in the chapter and that's Jacob. I didn't realise it in the first draft, ...

Thank you for the review! I'm so glad you can kind of see what I was trying to convey lol, because I mostly rushed through most of the chapters in ...

Oooof about the 30000 words

Hi . . . it's yosh again . . . BTW I USED THE LINK IN THE LAST CHAPTER SO I GOT TO PART 3 WITH EASE Again, Léonard had ...

i was also scared that i'd get flagged or something if i submitted a review to something twice :0

Heyo it's crabe yosh back again for another review! (Also, I used the link at the end of part 1 of unforgotten murder, so there is ABSOLUTELY NO WAY i ...

Thank you sooo much for the review! Honestly I'm pretty glad that there are people who can get interested in my story. :)

Heyo. I'm writing this now as a reply, but if it ends up not working, I will copy-paste it and put it as a literary comment :P (my guess is ...

Don't worry . . . as long I see you review the next chapter, I will know you looked back at my review review :DDD

Thanks for the review! :D Yes after your 20 chapters of nagging about my desc I decided to work a LOT harder on it >.< Since this was something of ...