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  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: to be known is to be loved

    Heya yoshi here for a review!!! (Been a while since I've done this so set me back on track if I do something wrong) At face value, this poem definitely ...

    May 12, 2024

  • Poetry » Literature, Other
    Re: Father Time

    Hey jazi! Wow, I wasn't really expecting much from a poem titled "Father Time", but there's something about the raw emotion and dialogue-like style of the poem that really hits ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Poetry » General, Other
    Re: Existential

    Heyo! Haven't written too many reviews in a while, but it's review day, so I guess I'll join in the fun! So this seems like a poem is kind of ...

    Oct 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: Five Wishes ~Chapter One~

    hiya came here since you subtly mentioned your novel in one of your reviews and I guess I'm here now hehe Anyways, I'm going to start off by saying this ...

    Jul 3, 2023

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural
    Re: The clown with the artificial doll eyes

    Hey vampricone! I saw your short story floating in the green room and decided to give it a review! So it looks like the main plot of this story is ...

    Mar 10, 2023

  • Poetry » Horror, Literature
    Re: Nighttime

    Hey Ari! Compared to other SH related stuff, this is actually quite short and simple. A little scary, but I wouldn't consider it horror, like you tagged. In fact, I ...

    Mar 3, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Fantasy
    Re: Sunny and the Algorithms of Gloom: Chapter 1.1

    Heyo mint!!! I was scrolling around the green room when I saw "1.1" and I was like this is where it all begins! So, I'll be reviewing this work. Now, ...

    Mar 2, 2023

  • Short Story » Dramatic, General
    Re: Icarus

    Hey dipro! I'm pretty sure I reviewed one of your other works (As the World Caves In), and it was pretty good, so be warned! I'm coming in with high ...

    Mar 2, 2023

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural
    Re: Draven’s story

    Hi hi hi vampricone! I saw this f l o a t i n g around the green room and thought, TIME TO REVIEW so here I am. anyways. First ...

    Mar 1, 2023

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: before i became like you

    Hey spatula! I saw your poem in the green room, and I decided, why not give it a review? Anyways, not much to say, so I'll get started. First off, ...

    Mar 1, 2023

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: orchids and moonlight

    Hey waterfalls! I happened to chance across your poem, so I thought, why not give it a review? Anyways, I haven't reviewed romance in a hot minute so this'll be ...

    Feb 28, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction
    Re: 2050 by RPD (Chapters 1 + 2)

    Hey there RPD! I happened to come across your novel here, so I guess I'll give it a review! Looks like we start off with the main character! Rafael already ...

    Feb 27, 2023

  • Poetry » Narrative, General
    Re: a 2000's fad

    Hey Seirre! I happened to chance across your poem here so I thought why not give it a review? (On an unrelated note, I ALWAYS spell your username wrong. I ...

    Feb 27, 2023

  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual
    Re: Sin.

    Hey there yamatri! I love this poem you have here. It's short and concise, but it gets the point across. I love dark tones in this poem, and the sort ...

    Feb 27, 2023

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: 108.

    Hi hi! Love the poem (and the font. Too much YWS stuff has that same old arial . . .) SO I am not too good with a b s ...

    Feb 27, 2023


According to all known laws of aviation, there is no way a bee should be able to fly. Its wings are too small to get its fat little body off the ground.
— The Bee Movie