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I thought it was really good. I could almost feel your character’s pain and terror. You have pretty good description, very visual and visceral, and the dialogue is well-done. There ...

I really enjoyed the voice of this story. It’s kinda like it’s overloaded with private eye detective story cliches, like, “It was the beginning of a hundred romances” and “His ...

OK, so at first I thought this might be kinda lame, but your description about it being the worst thing you’ve ever written piqued my interest. It’s flipping hilariious. I ...

And to think, if Norm had just stayed awake when they went in and remembered the deal with the crumbs, he would’ve made it and your main character would never ...

I'll review a few.

A lot of the time it'll be the aesthetics or the author. Sometimes, It'll be by recommendation, but then only if someone gives me the book.

I'll try to get on and review something...I may get some time, but I kinda doubt it.

Judging from the fact that you put "An ode to the clock" under romantic short stories, I'm inclined to agree; you definitely need someone. This was equal parts funny and ...

I really loved this story. Maybe it's partially because I know a guitar-toting guy named Jayce (I know, different spelling) and he's pretty cool. I found your descriptions of what ...

First thing, I don't intend to kill off Ella anytime soon. Mainly because I tried writing about Jeremy and he is DEAD BORING. So this is me self-consciously writing from ...

Wow, that sucks for him. And her. This could also be aptly titled, "War Sucks." You have some good imagery here, a really good action scene and I almost feel ...

First off, I kinda liked the story. It's dark, well enough, and it sends little shivers down my spine. You have a few problems with grammar, like you should use ...

First off, the adrenaline didn't need to be mentioned. If you just tell us what's happening to him and how he feels, it's enough. I did kinda wonder why the ...

Alright, your story has some problems. First, you use "he" too often. Second, you chop up your sentences more than you should. Some words shouldn't be at the beginnings of ...

Annoying Intro by author: Have you ever heard the phrase, "I'm not a jerk, I just play one on TV"? Well, this is a disclaimer. I don't believe everything Ella ...