yombleflobber

unfortunately it turns her into a zombie.

Amazingly, there's a lot of critical advice I can give you. Unfortunately, there's not a lot of general reviewy stuff I can do since there's only like three sentences. Since ...

Unfortunately, it's a compromise in which she loses one of her legs.

Granted, but I survive because I suddenly fall out of favor that day. I wish I had a shovel so I could bury all of you.

Granted, but I steal yours and replace it with biscuit juice. I wish I was one of the trusted few.

Granted, but he has feasts of the unutterable flesh !(see Edgar Allen Poe's Tale of Jerusalem. It's actually not scary, it just sounds like it) I wish he gave out ...

Well, the first part doesn't really make much sense with the rest of it. If you're going to discuss the anger and then talk about how it comes out, you ...

Nice, very cute. I'm not sure I have any real criticisms that haven't already been mentioned and I like these little "slice of life" pieces that don't tell a huge ...

I did lose my rubber band ball. It was sad. I cried. Well, not really, I just made another one. Anyway... Granted, but its reign is fraught with slander and ...

Fortunately, she has the presence of mind to run away before they can eat her.

Granted, but you can't go there. I wish I had a rubber band ball.

Granted, but after receiving it, I say I don't wanted and, when the panda shows up, I bust out a M1919 Browning machine gun. I wish I had some ammo ...

Technically, yes...OK, you can't get a job! Anyway...granted, but you get stuck in a lightning storm and get swept out to sea where you foolishly land in the water, which ...

Granted, now you have to go to college! I wish I had my driver's license.

Granted, but in your fury at having received the carriage at an inopportune time means you pound it into the ground in frustration. I wish your pony would come back ...