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Re: Circus Pirates 1
Thanks everyone! Especially hekate and Heather. :D That's very helpful and I thing I'll use your first suggestion on reworking the beginning of that Heather. Thanks. :) I'll try to ...
Mon Mar 17, 2008 7:23 pm -
Re: It all comes back to you
I don't know what it was about this, but I really love it. Hm. Very affective. ~Yoyo
Tue Mar 04, 2008 8:31 pm -
Re: The Cra-yon Lay-onds 3
All the iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii's burn my eyes. *cries* Ants, Bugtopia... goal-den crayon eatery... P.P.S You are one funny 100 year old man. O.o
Mon Mar 03, 2008 4:09 am -
Re: Diva
Gorgeous piece! The imagery is wonderful, and the language you use is beautiful as well. No complaints! Keep writing! ~Yoyo 8)
Fri Feb 29, 2008 1:34 pm -
Re: It Was Time
Seree, you're asking be to write a different story than this is. And you're also asking me to change my writing style. I appreciate your advice here, but I don't ...
Mon Feb 25, 2008 10:12 pm -
Re: Breathing
Wow! I'm so flattered on the amount of feedback on this and the reactions! And thanks for your suggestions on fixes PerforatedxHearts, and you suggestion on it being publishable! I ...
Fri Feb 22, 2008 11:25 pm -
Re: Love's Suicide
Hm, yeah, I know it isn't great. I was mad at the time. I don't write as well when I'm emotional. Sorry my emo-ness came out. XD It made sense ...
Fri Feb 22, 2008 11:16 pm -
Re: A Spirit Within
Augh! Space your paragraphs and I'll come back. Please!!
Fri Jan 25, 2008 2:05 am -
Re: Share the Journey
Anyone else? :|
Fri Jan 18, 2008 11:33 pm -
Re: The Strong Arrow
Thanks Seree and chayonz. And no, I never did find him. :( I was stupid for not doing anything. I seriously could have. It was just weird, the connection that ...
Wed Jan 16, 2008 9:09 pm -
Re: Share the Journey
Thanks Syd and aussie. Hehe... me likes choloclate. *wipes up drool* Um, yeah I know what you mean about extending this though. I typically do short poetry like this, but ...
Wed Jan 16, 2008 4:15 am -
Re: The Strong Arrow
Thanks! Some of that you misunderstood though (1, 3), and others are stylistic choices (7, 8, 9) and I will not be changing those. But thanks for catching the others! ...
Tue Jan 15, 2008 9:38 pm -
Re: Cliched Heartbreak
Thanks for the positive reviews guys! I'm really happy with how this one turned out. And I'm really glad you didn't find this to fall under your typical "dpressing love ...
Sat Dec 08, 2007 8:58 pm -
Re: You're Not There
Yes, you are correct pain. And thatks guys for the crits! :)
Sat Dec 08, 2007 8:53 pm -
Re: Not Now
Thanks guys. Maybe I'll work on it. Maybe not. It isn't hugely important. *shrug* Just playing around. :) chocoholic: Thanks for the other critique too. ^^ And from reading that ...
Wed Dec 05, 2007 4:11 am