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Thanks you, my darling Peng, and madame President. I will definitely take some of your suggestions. The movie rather than slide show technique is the perfect way of describing my ...

Elinor - Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! It was great meeting you in the chat as well. :) Suz - First of all, thanks! I'm glad you ...

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Thank you June for the wonderful review! :) ~Yoyo 8)

Thanks for the wonderful review! I'm glad you liked and and caught the change in voice through the poem. That's the major element I want people to see there. ;) ...

*poke poke* Anyone? :(

Lassie is hott. That is all. ;) Great job Flem. ~Yoyo 8)

Hehe, thank you for your wonderful reviews Jabby. You're very helpful. As the writer, I can't find all those little, obvious mistakes, so I really thank you for pointing them ...

Hahaha! Nice job Saint. I think Suz already pretty much killed it, so I won't comment, other than to say I loved it. ^_^ ~Yoyo 8)

Sweeney! You're supposed to wait until Part 5 to find out "who/what" Landon is. ;) But no worries, Part 5 is on its way. :D ~Yoyo 8)

Thank you Jabby and Heather! ^^ I made most of your fixes, but I would like to point out, Heather, that Fat Men were actually quite a popular and common ...

Cool. I really liked the imagery in this. I may not have understood it, but not all poetry is meant to be understood. Interesting. Keep writing! ~Yoyo 8)

Thanks JFW! That's really helpful for me. ^_^ I'll look over it again in a few days (to let my mind get off it) and try your suggestion with making ...

Thanks guys! And Mike, continue into Chapter 2 and you'll see they arent' exactly pirates. ;) It's called Cahpter 2 for a reason. ^_^ ~Yoyo 8)

Thanks again guys! I'll definitely get working on your suggestions. ;) ~Yoyo 8)