yellowSummerroom

Buttryfly line is excellent. Something once so beautiful but now nothing. Great stuff

Great stuff. For starters the title is fantastic. I've never been in this mindset but the poem gives a bold insight into it.

I liked the flow of the poem. I liked how it looked on the page too! I also think autumn evokes all sorts of emotions in people so great choice ...

'She loved your smile too.' Great line, I think everybody has felt like that before. I didn't realise about the 2:1 ratio so I checked your work out. All the ...

Hello, I don't feel I want to critique a poem in which you have clearly been so brave and so open. It was an interesting read and I do hope ...

Dignity is a rare trait around here. Smashed glass and vomit are always near. The thuggish activities are blamed on the beer. A flash from a slapper results in a ...