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yearsofpain

  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Who am I?

    Hey, First of all, wow. You're only 13 years old. You have such a gift for writing. The theme of this poem is really a timeless one but it has ...

    Mar 20, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Mother.

    What I like about this poem is the hope element. You depict your feelings for your mom so well that I connected with you on some level. Very good poem, ...

    Mar 20, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Anger

    WHAT I UNDERSTOOD (#1 review!) "It’s like a deep and bitter well, The water unwanted, sad that it is" Something very prevailing is very upsetting. We pray it doesn't struck ...

    Mar 20, 2017


This is the way the world ends, not with a bang but a whimper.
— T.S. Eliot