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Part three in Hanna's Holocaust. Thanks for reading. :) March 12th, 1941. Momma told me she was going out to get some milk and bread this morning. I remember looking ...

Okay, thanks to you both. :) Although Haruno Sakura said that the gas was a very sweet smell, Hanna was having a nightmare, so she never really KNEW what the ...

Thanks everyone for review my story. I can see where you are coming from. I really have never even heard of "Hanna's Suitcase" until tennisprincess mentioned it. I've never read ...

Oohh, I really liked this. It was sweet and very sad. JabberHut beat me to the mechanics of it. Lol. I really liked the 13th stanza of this poem. It ...

Oohhh! Scary! I like it. :) Steve: One word run. Shouldn't this be... "One word. Run!" It sounds better and shows more emotion. Otherwise, I liked it. Good plot. I ...

Part two of Hanna's Holocaust short story. January 17th, 1936. It has been such a long time since I have recorded in this journal last. I seemed to have grown ...

Yes, a 94 out of 100%. Thank you, yes I did feel I did pretty well. The rest of the story gets more interesting than the beginning.

Thanks guys & gals. Yes, I know about The Diary of Anne Frank, and no I have not read it. I already got this graded, I was just sharing... I ...

Hanna's Holocaust; Part One. Information: These are diary entries of a little girl living through the Holocaust. She starts off at age 10 and progresses. Let me know what you ...

Your diary entry was interesting. You just need to make sure you are putting punctuation in the correct places. I know that usually when you free write in a diary, ...

I really like your style of writing. She put on a sweatshirt, a striped purple sweater, a pair of jeans and sneakers, and quietly opened the bedroom door, fearing that ...