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Thanks so much for all the open criticism, I love it. :) I'm glad that you guys enjoyed it and I hope all of you know I'm overjoyed that you ...

This was a great poem, the rhyming definitely gave it a different feeling than I could imagine it not having. The last stanza was my favorite, last line specifically.

Flowing through your being, silently You think your dreaming. It changes who you are, slowly Soon you've gone too far. You let this influence you, aware Not solid anymore you're ...