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Re: My Last Duchess
Hey...I just read this poem in my college english class. It shows the man's oppostition to his last duchess's flirtatious nature and the way she enjoys the simplicity of life. ...
Oct 29, 2010 -
Re: Chasing Cars
These stories are so touching. I could not have written them any better. I really think you have a lot of potential as a writer because your word choice is ...
Oct 29, 2010 -
Re: Untitled: Part One
I really enjoyed reading this, although it was confusing- its only the beginning- and a little overly dramatic, in my opinion. But keep up the good work! I'll definitly check ...
Oct 28, 2010 -
Re: White
In this poem the picture the words painted, to me, was more important than the actual meaning. Choosing white over black to signify death is unique and creative, but doesn't ...
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: Faded Memory
You used to be my dearest friend, The one I told my secrets too. I thought we'd always be together, You used to be the one I loved, The one ...
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: The Ice Sculpture
This is great! It is so packed with meaning in every single word. The part about acid scars was really intense, in fact, the entire poem was really intense. I ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: Lonely Hearts
Lonely hearts hiding behind false smiles Catch each other’s eyes, quickly shying away Walking towards you, feels like many miles Slowly slipping away; and I’m on the fray ….and its ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: The King of Hearts
This piece of work really portrays someone's feelings..whether they be directly yours or someone else's. However, I thought it was strange for the guy to be in that position and ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: Hello's and goodbye's.
hey i felt like you rushed it and where was what happened before?
Oct 24, 2010
