xocsunx

On the side of a highway. The year is 1955. The time is midnight. Jerry MacLean is the only survivor of a car accedent involving a tractor trailer which has ...

**Just felt like writing sumthing right now, so this is just off the top of my head.** **It's probably not great, but anyway...tell me what u think** Darkness. I fell ...

It was really good - you captured the mood perfectly, and the dialoug was nicely spaced. Just one thing. When you said "the cops will here", I think it should ...

Maggie and Davinia sat in the sharp, dark shadows of the thorn bushes which encircled the outer edges of Greenwich. Maggie's, tiny, soft breath, that of a child four or ...

It had been a long time since Zyferous had seen light. Years infact. But now, as he stood atop the Greenwhich Hill, Jade Emblem clasped in his long, wirey hands, ...

That was really sweet. I'd like to know what happens. Please keep it going. xocsunx 8)

I guess that's kind of a problem I have. I kind of forget about the gramatical stuff. :wink:

"So here you are again?" Pretty slow thing to say to someone you've been waiting around for for eleven years. Pretty lame. But I said it. And I don't regret ...

I think it's a little bit too much like Harry Potter. Maybe you should change the setting at the start to make it a little more your own. Other than ...

Sam lay on the bed. It was well past one in the morning. His only source of light bled from the tiny panes in the window, causing the shadows to ...