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:p The narrarator was a guy. So 'he loves him' was actually right, because there's no difference between 'he loves her' and 'she loves him' but there is between 'he ...

Woah, did it seem like Shawn killed his daughter? Hmm. Must go back and change that. It was supposed to be like he killed someone else - took revenge on ...

I have, actually, read your prologue. If you take a look, I left you a comment. So the confusion is from someone who's read all of it so far.