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To me this sounds like it's about a gang, but I'm not exactly sure. Whatever it's about though, you sure made this poem very powerful, especially with the repetition. I ...

That was awful. Good job. :D

Poetry has no definition. You could really call anything a poem if you really wanted to. The best thing about poetry is that there are no rules to it. :D ...

I do the same thing, but I feel as though I don't know how to edit my poem. All of the poems that I publish on this I have written ...

This poem kind of overwhelmed me, although I found a lot of great imagery in it. I liked your rhyme scheme, but I didn't exactly understand your poem at all. ...

This is how I felt when my great grandmother passed away 2 years ago... :( It seems as though it came and went, The ended time that we have spent. ...

I found this poem in my notebook that I wrote in over vacation, but I don't remember writing it because I was so tired. It's funny because it's about not ...

thank you guys! you all really helped. i'm an amateur at poetry so bear with me lol. and the song "fireflies" actually inspired me because at the moment, i suffer ...

I felt as though this poem was very powerful, and I think that a few of the devices that you used in it contributed, including the irregular rhyme scheme. I ...

Lol I was up for 2 days straight when I wrote this, bear with me. :D There once was a story of a one-inch tall prince, How much he meant, ...

Definitely one of my worst poems... It's supposed to be about divorce, but I think that it's about friendship now that I read it over. How long has it been? ...

I thought that this was amazing, and I can totally relate. But some of the lines seemed like they were only there because they had to rhyme. Other than that, ...

I know, it's kind of amateurish, but this is one of my first poems. You can look out the window And see that the sky is blue, But you will ...

Light arrives From the stars far away, And yet it is enough To make consciousness sway. But not for me, Your world may be fake. But what I see is ...