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Re: If I Fall....
I Agree With The First Post!Honest Mistake Though, I Do It All The Time. I Love It! The Title Caught My Attention Cause "If I Fall" Is One Of My ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Black and White?
I Love It The "Strawberry Avalanche" Picture! Especially The Wolf :) Question Though, What Do The Lyrics Have To Do With The Lyrics? Or Are They Just There For Show? ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: Ludicrous Love
Gosh I Have Nothing To Correct :/ But I LOVED IT! I Had To Break Out A Dictionary 2x Just To Understand It! But In My Opinion Poetry Isn't Meant ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: Japan
can't choose which version is better...there is no right or wrong with poetry
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Japan
;)Very Touching! I Love It! I Posted It On Facebook For Everyone Of My Friends To See! Don't Worry I Gave Credit :) Thanks For That Poem ~Xiahou Zay
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Cookie Whisperer
Ok I Have To Admit This Is Hilarious Probably One Of The Highlights Of My Day *Posts On Facebook* But I Don't Understand Why They Change Point Of View, Overall ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: Mirror prologue
The Title Captured My Attention, But I Don't Understand The Plot, But It's All Right Overall, Keep Writing! Sorry For Such A Bad Review But That's All I Have. :C ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death
I Never Knew Death Was A Mail Carrier XD This Was To Funny, I Don't Know If It Was Meant To Be Funny Or Not But I Took It As ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Anything But Normal~Chapter One, Part Two
Hey RayHutch! I've Been Waiting For This Part Of The Story, I Second ShadowHunter's Edits But This Part Just Keeps Me Thinking... I only occasionally came here with Seth You ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Snap Chapter 1
Wow Just So Amazing. I Visualized It In My Head. But I Want To Know More. Just Keep Writing! And For The Poem, Keeps Me Wondering What The Answer Is. ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: The morning show
:0 That Was Amazing! I Got Lost At Flying beautys slice the air, Ever so slowly and ever so lightly, The gliding figures swoop in the air, But Overall Just ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: The Real World (Chapter 1)
@rayhutch thanks :) i never have time to read my own stuff, let alone write. thanks your edits have been made :)
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: The Real World (Chapter 1)
So Here Is Chapter 1 Of My Story. I Know It's Short And All But Yeah. Any Corrections Will Be Made ASAP!Your Reviews Matter And Thanks. Wait Should I Give ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Anything But Normal~Chapter One, Part One
I Like It, But Can You Tell Us What's It About? You Should Put That In The Beginning Of This Post. But That's By Choice And Welcome. I'm Also New ...
Mar 13, 2011 -
Re: Alpha Day Chapter One
I Like Your Plot, It Reminds Me Of "The Hunger Games" And It's Funny How You Kind Of Made Fun Of The Vampires From "Twilight". I Like Twilight And All ...
Mar 12, 2011
