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I loved it. Well for me,it is very well written. Keep writing! :)

Hey! That was a very helpful review. I will inform you if I make any changes, but I'll stick to this for a moment. I wanted to get more reviews/helps ...

I find it hard to breathe These thoughts torture me by day; And nightmares poison me by night I can’t seem to recall Am I still beside you? As I ...

Another helpful review! I wouldn't realize I was using too much of unnecessary words till you mentioned that. Try to minimize it next time. Thank you! :)

I loved it. You have brilliant ideas and words and I loved the ending of your poem as well.

Hey! Thanks for the review. It was a helpful review to know my errors. :D And thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate it. xoxo

I loved how it was well-written. It is full of expressions and strong emotions put up together and I can attach to those feelings you were trying to convey. By ...

I love it! I'm a new member so your poem is seemingly perfect for me. :) By the way, are you by any chance reading gothics poetry? I see dark ...

I loved it so much. I can relate so much with your words cause I am feeling that now too. :) I'm a beginner as well but you seem more ...

ahh,now i know how it looked for a lyric poetry. hahah. i was just posting a poem and i don't have any clue of these lyric dramatic narrative poetry :D ...

yes,i showed this to a friend and she seemingly couldn't understand the flow of my poem. and yep,the content is dark. coz i read too much of gothic poetry. it's ...

She lives in the dark For her to hide her painfull mark You won't see her cry Cause her eyes show no fear For her soul can't dissolve in light ...