xavia-finch

Omg he's a werewolf is he??? that's so clever, I only just got it. I was wondering what was the go with him. Is this set in germany?? The german ...

Thank you xavia-finch for your advice...I really like your ideas and I'll look it over and see what I can do to tell you the truth I put this all ...

Yeah but the first few chapters of harry potter was still linked to the fantasy world. There were clues to the magic world from the first page. Anyways thats fine, ...

Okay so this is the first part of my first story that I've ever submitted. I'm still a little new at this so I guess could use all the help ...

Hear hear sorsha! Dw.. its not just your stories that have received pointless comments from -

I'm not judging you, but if you want people to comment on your writing and not the subject matter you could just pretend its fictional. Everything we write, fiction or ...

I only read the first few paragraphs because im rushed for time and Ill do a better critique later. But I saw what i needed to see. Your back into ...

I have no time for constructive criticism, i just wanted to say i think this story is really good. Very interesting. If theres more ill read it.