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I like : hellogoodbye, bel's boys, mcfly, lily allen ect.

hellogoodbye !!! (as in music )

Only thing i can think of to draw !

How can you do this to me, You are so far,yet I see you everyday. Ripping through my head in an instant, A heartbreaking second of pain, But then you ...

I picked it up, And quickly closed the freezer door. An icy mist was already filling the room. The tiled floor made my feet sting with cold, So I ran ...

Thanks, that was helpful. I don't really capitalize my "I" much because I don't really check for that but I will in future. I never noticed the pattern that you ...

It was heavy on my shoulders, It's weight made me feel i was a tiny grain of sand, Crushed by thousands of footsteps. It tugged at my clothes, I felt ...

That isn't part of the poem ( obviously ) i just felt like adding it.

I blinked hard, Trying to stop my sadness in its tracks. I opened my eyes again, But my sight clouded over. It was too late, Tears fell from my eyes. ...

A chance to dream A chance to fly And dance around the midnight sky, A chance to meet friends old and new And party 'til the night is through. The ...

it's good but i don't like the "what if i burp and give you a fright? " line ... it is a bit weird

Nice poem,I think you should call it Be or Live