xXTheBlackSheepXx

Oh my gosh, so sorry for the uber late response! What can I say, I've been way too busy. I'll be getting quicker with my reviews, hopefully. Chap 7 is ...

no problemo! ;)

Louis pressed a cool cloth to the hollow of her neck, looking up at Violet at the same instant to make sure that she was still sleeping. The woman caught ...

I skimmed through it again, and wow, great job with adding description. It's exactly what I was talking about! Keep it up! I'll get to part 2 asap :)

My heart pumped regularly, This information is irrevelant. A heart always pumps 'regularily', so what is the point of pointing it out? darent did not dare I darent look away ...

No problem :D Oh, and could you send me a PM once you've posted the next parts?

I really liked this. It told a story in just four stanzas that was really powerful. And I absolutely love your title! :D

Hi xXTheBlackSheepXx I like the title by the way. Thank you :) Actually, the reason I've waited so long to post this was because I couldn't think of a proper ...

Overall: This was very well written, and I can`t wait to read more. Your descriptions were nice, the story had very strong emotions, and you did a perfect job not ...

It's always good to start with one sensation, narrowed down, but you've limited yourself here a little bit in that you keep repeating "smelt" and "stench." Because it is immediately ...

Hey there! Just wanted to say that i loved this, thought you wrote this really well, and it was very entertaining. I would love to see more of your work! ...

haha that's why i put 'miraculously' in there. Because it does seem pretty unbelievable. And the reason he had to keep driving is because if he would've kept running, the ...

Now the next part I really couldn’t find anything wrong with. You can throw all kinds of comic relief in here, the playfulness between Kara and Mareck was great, and ...

So here’s review #2! First of all I’m going to split this into 2 chapters for you because like I said this is way too long. I think the spot ...

of course :)