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The cool breeze rushed over my face and tousled my hair. The rain was coming down just hard enough to drench my hair. Everyone was standing around tears in their ...

Prologue The silence was more than I could bear. My friends stood on either side of me, but I could do nothing to save them, except the thing that would ...

“I can’t see…” I said. I felt myself turn automatically and slowly, but carefully ran my fingers over his face. A strong jawline, cheeks lined with an occasional scar. I ...

I wiped away my tears that I had been holding in for an hour now. My mother was buying a few spare eggs from our neighbors, Elouise and Richard, and ...

I think you’re very good at descriptions but seem to overuse them a bit. It felt like you’d go back and forth like ‘there was blood all over the floor’, ...

My heart raced as I rode into town. Robin Hood, I had met The Robin Hood. A smile spread across my face at the thought that he had touched me, ...

Chapter One I have always wondered if the ocean is really a deep blue, and if the sky is a light blue. I wish that I could savor the beauty ...

Hey Timmie!! :D Alright here comes the review! So I see you already have some great reviews here, and I think they covered all the grammar errors I found. I’ll ...

Sila brushed against my white fur as he walked ahead of me, and I shivered. It was almost pitch black in the woods at night; the wind whistled through the ...

Alright, the hard part is over, now I just have to wait, I think to myself. (put thought in italics )As I linger here I examine my yard,the moon casts ...

Congrats on your first post!! :D and welcome to YWS. Looking after pets have lately became my obsession. It's not just an obsession but an activity by which I can ...

The sun was peeking through my bedroom window when I woke up to seven a.m. It was a supposed to be (supposed to be a) wonderful Saturday morning until I ...

I’m (I was) pretty relieved when I got to school looking perfectly normal. If I met someone new, I knew that he wouldn’t suspect a thing about my recent misfortunes. ...

I can’t believe this! Do you remember a time when you wished the whole world except you stood still and you’d put things where you’d want them to be? Or ...

I hear my phone ringing in the background of my overwhelmed mind; With a struggle, I pull myself back to the present to answer it. "Hello," I say way too ...