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Hiya Sopster! I'm stopping by for a review! Hope I can help :) The year was 2050, the Saviours and Destructors were at each others throats and they weren’t gaining ...

Hey RedRaven! Stopping by to review! :D Here's a few things: With angry-red eyes, he throws it at me before dragging me out the door. I'm not sure how I ...

Hi ofir! I had a great time reading this. I can't find much at all to critique, but I will try my best. To be honest, I was confused at ...

Hi Rachael! I usually don't go for this type of writing (long descriptions tend to bore me) but I have to admit I really loved what you wrote. The third ...

“I assure you I will be fine sheriff,” I said and left the house and went back into the stables, to find Nightshade and the horse I had ridden home ...

“There’s nothing to talk about,” Zachary answered Shirley’s question. You should just say ‘Zachary answered’ because we know he was answering Shirley. Shirley played with her dyed, bright

I think this went a little slow, but it’s still the beginning and you are probably setting this up for something. To me it wasn’t as interesting as your first ...

“But what if the bind me up and I can’t yell?” they “Someone will know,” Robin assured me. “You won’t be alone.” I nodded in reply and turned, but Robin ...

“Because…” here it went. I would tell him that I was really Ivy and that I had runaway from home because of a stupid dream and how I was really ...

with smaller steels poles circling the tent. Steel poles In the center of the dirt stage was a figure juggling three incandescent torches, burning. If the torches are incandescent, then ...

Rosa's Life Rosa walked out her apartment. She preferred walking to work while the guys who worked with her liked showing of their cars. Well boys will be boys. Then ...

Chapter 1 Silently following the small group of riders, I remained a good distance away. As the night closed in around me I wouldn’t have to worry about the distance ...

The Shadow darted down the deserted length of O’Brein Street, his movements as graceful as a very tall, two-legged cat’s against the city’s cracking walls and rough streets. That is ...

Stumbling awkwardly over roots concealed in the midnight darkness, Zachary the Vampire ran as fast he could. His fingers were wrapped securely around a small, shiny object, clutched close to ...

Beep, beep, beep, beep. Annette groaned as the shrill alarm beeps woke her from slumber. She pulled the satin laced pillow over her now golden hair and tried to get ...