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Hey there, I think you did a very realistic account of an eating disorder. It’s not just a problem with putting food in your mouth, it’s a mental state. I’ve ...

*NW Chronicles* - Book 1 - The Shuji Tower Chapter 1 : A Monster & A Friend I awoke with a fright, a scream is all that I could muster ...

John makes his way back to the fire and lays and watches the flames as they dance. Above, an eagle soars, a shadow in the night. Stinging embers drift against ...

I am really liking this Prince guy so far. I get the impression that he’s younger, more like a teenager, but that might just be my imagination. It’s really interesting ...

Wow, so far I’m really liking this Barrow guy, the photographer. Well, you know what I mean. I hate him actually, and the idea of him having some sort of ...

She stares into the handcrafted vanity mirror, gaze shifting in the refection reflection? , following his movement. Samuel and John rush to the barn doors and peak peek through the ...

Hey there :) Hello Are You There I Can You Get a Life And Get out Of Here Thank You LOL The only thing that felt out of place was ...

Hey ^_^ I'm here to review for ya. Jesse James was never a fool, He could handle a gun like a thread on a spool. A gun crazed criminal the ...

Hey I just had to check out one of your poems :) And I'm really glad I did! This is great :D They say the windows to the heart, no ...

“So.” I blushed, unsure of what exactly was going on. Jonah stood across from me, the worn wooden floor a vast expanse between us. I could still feel my mouth ...

Chapter Fifteen The garden stretched around a small cabin and out of sight. Flowers grew wild and untamed and the only sign of human interference was the small stone footpath ...

I tapped my fingers against the dashboard, wondering about what on earth he could have planned in such a short time. We’d only been at the mall an hour ago, ...

Jonah sat in the back seat of The Chum Buggy, with Laynie and me up front. He braided the hair at the nape of my neck, sending little bursts of ...

Very awesome :D You do a really great job with the freestyle writing. To me, all of your entries had great imagery and my attention was hooked all the way ...

Hey :) Well, I'm terrible at critiquing poems, but I'll give it a shot! I'll keep wandering my dank Mind until I find a place to think. Uniridescent foot falls ...