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Hey, Grim :) This seems interesting, I'll probably follow through with the next chapter since this was just a teaser. I see that this is going to be a post-apocalyptic ...

“Not really,” he answered quietly. I looked away from him and glimpsed my reflection in the mirror. My wet hair stuck out at strange angles and my eyes had dark ...

This was a much better chapter :) Though it sounds weird to say it, because there was so much pain. No odd grammar mistakes that I could find, I think ...

I was going home for the night so I could wake up in the morning and help set up for the always dreaded birthday party. Laynie and Jonah would be ...

Not your best chapter, I have to say. Plot-wise, there's nothing here that is essential. As fun as it is to read about your characters having a good time, swimming ...

Hey Ty, it's been a while ^_^ Glad to see you've got more chapters up! I chuckled softly, choking back a small explosion of giggles. “What?” Jonah said, covering his ...

Hiya :) So first off I have to say that I'm no good at reviewing poetry, so bear with me lol. Overall, I thought this was really good ^_^ It ...

Hey! I'm awful at reviewing poetry x) But I liked this! The words were nice, and flowed really well. I love how the ending rhymed a bit. For me, the ...

She drags me along behind him her a few more blocks and then stops at a fire escape. Spitz’ technically, I think it should be Spitz’s, because you can’t leave ...

I huff [and] return to my own thoughts, to the third thing I simply must do when I am free. I did not hear anymore after the soldiers’ no apostrophe ...

Chapter Three: I should probably learn some self-control before I attack someone who can’t heal. We continued studying human subjects for four days. Two days before my birthday, Hayden, another ...

Chapter Two: We all have our talents—even if some of them aren’t real. A tall, blonde woman walked into the library and pulled a few books off the shelves. She ...

Hey, I haven’t reviewed anything new in a while so I’m gonna give this a shot ^_^ First of all, I love vampire stories. Even though there are a bajillion ...

This is great! I really like it ^_^ I think this is an amazing 'on the spot' poem :D Do you lie and say, “I love you more than he”? ...

Chapter 2 "To the person in the bell jar, blank and stopped as a dead baby, the world itself is a bad dream." — Sylvia Plath (The Bell Jar) Beep-beep. ...