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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Medusa

    First of all, I don’t know much about Greek mythology. I don’t know how to tell what parts of your story are based on mythology, or of your own imagination, ...

    Apr 9, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Random First Chapter

    Wow, that's very good! I think that it's a very good idea and I could read a lot more. I think though you didn't need that much spacing through it, ...

    Apr 9, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Random First Chapter

    lol, thanks for your review! Harshness is not a problem here, feel free to go all out :) And for the record, i still haven't read any book of the ...

    Apr 9, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: LakeView - Chapter 1

    I was confused about the power thing too. For his 16th birthday, is his gift supposed to be some kind of superpower? Or am I totally off track? XD Also, ...

    Apr 9, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Fifth chapter to my werewolf story!!

    Another good chapter! I used to like Issac’s character until now. At first, I thought he was in his 20’s- like maybe 23-26 years old. But 33!!! Woah, that’s just ...

    Apr 9, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: A Criminal's Heart - Ch-1(Olivia)

    Here's my two cents, thanks for listening :) You did a good job on this, the only problem I had was that I didn’t really connect with your characters. I ...

    Apr 9, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Random First Chapter

    This piece kinda fell out of my brain, and i'm not sure if it's any good or not. Any reviews would be really helpful because i'm trying to figure out ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Fourth chapter to my werewolf story!(Stiiiil untitled.)

    I still love this story. Can’t wait to find out what happens next!!

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Third chapter to my werewolf story! (Still untitled)

    Loved it!! Although I have to admit I think I’ve known what Ayden was since the last chapter. I think she’s that wolf in Kara’s dream, and that either she ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Second chapter to my werewolf story! (Sorry, it's untitled)

    Wow I’m really loving this story!! Your main character is great, and I can totally relate to her :) The relationships are very well done, and I like how each ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Heart Of A God ( Intro and Ch 1)

    Just wanted to say thanks for posting this. :) It’s incredible!! I can’t wait until you write more!

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: Addictions (1) -Edited-

    I really loved it! I thought that the characters were very real, and the dialogue was very good. I can’t wait to see more of this. Keep writing! :)

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: I don't think there is any heart left for you to break *ED*

    It was a little weird for me. The whole time I was reading this I had this big cheesy performance playing in my head. It was your typical aggressive jerk ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Hands

    Oh my gosh I loved it! I love everything about it! Could you PM me when you post more?

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Operation 70EX Prologue

    I honestly didn’t know what you were talking about for the first few paragraphs. The electronic desk, or whatever it was, had me really confused. I mean, what’s the point ...

    Apr 7, 2010


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