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Re: Medusa
First of all, I don’t know much about Greek mythology. I don’t know how to tell what parts of your story are based on mythology, or of your own imagination, ...
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Re: Random First Chapter
Wow, that's very good! I think that it's a very good idea and I could read a lot more. I think though you didn't need that much spacing through it, ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: Random First Chapter
lol, thanks for your review! Harshness is not a problem here, feel free to go all out :) And for the record, i still haven't read any book of the ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: LakeView - Chapter 1
I was confused about the power thing too. For his 16th birthday, is his gift supposed to be some kind of superpower? Or am I totally off track? XD Also, ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: Fifth chapter to my werewolf story!!
Another good chapter! I used to like Issac’s character until now. At first, I thought he was in his 20’s- like maybe 23-26 years old. But 33!!! Woah, that’s just ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: A Criminal's Heart - Ch-1(Olivia)
Here's my two cents, thanks for listening :) You did a good job on this, the only problem I had was that I didn’t really connect with your characters. I ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: Random First Chapter
This piece kinda fell out of my brain, and i'm not sure if it's any good or not. Any reviews would be really helpful because i'm trying to figure out ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Fourth chapter to my werewolf story!(Stiiiil untitled.)
I still love this story. Can’t wait to find out what happens next!!
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Third chapter to my werewolf story! (Still untitled)
Loved it!! Although I have to admit I think I’ve known what Ayden was since the last chapter. I think she’s that wolf in Kara’s dream, and that either she ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Second chapter to my werewolf story! (Sorry, it's untitled)
Wow I’m really loving this story!! Your main character is great, and I can totally relate to her :) The relationships are very well done, and I like how each ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: The Heart Of A God ( Intro and Ch 1)
Just wanted to say thanks for posting this. :) It’s incredible!! I can’t wait until you write more!
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Addictions (1) -Edited-
I really loved it! I thought that the characters were very real, and the dialogue was very good. I can’t wait to see more of this. Keep writing! :)
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: I don't think there is any heart left for you to break *ED*
It was a little weird for me. The whole time I was reading this I had this big cheesy performance playing in my head. It was your typical aggressive jerk ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Hands
Oh my gosh I loved it! I love everything about it! Could you PM me when you post more?
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Operation 70EX Prologue
I honestly didn’t know what you were talking about for the first few paragraphs. The electronic desk, or whatever it was, had me really confused. I mean, what’s the point ...
Apr 7, 2010
