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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Rhyme Scheme

    Yea I really liked this too. I totally understand what you're saying by this xD. I always love it when people make poems look more artistic, like when you colored ...

    Jun 26, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Immortal Heart

    hey there! well you already know that i emailed my review to you. I also think it would help you to get more reviews on this if you posted this ...

    Jun 24, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Savage Beasts Ch1

    Hi xXTheBlackSheepXx I like the title by the way. Thank you :) Actually, the reason I've waited so long to post this was because I couldn't think of a proper ...

    Jun 22, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Savage Beasts Ch1

    Overall: This was very well written, and I can`t wait to read more. Your descriptions were nice, the story had very strong emotions, and you did a perfect job not ...

    Jun 22, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Savage Beasts Ch1

    It's always good to start with one sensation, narrowed down, but you've limited yourself here a little bit in that you keep repeating "smelt" and "stench." Because it is immediately ...

    Jun 22, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Savage Beasts Ch1

    *I wasn't too sure about the rating; there's blood and emotional trauma in this first chapter, so i guess watch out for that. Any reviews are immensely appreciated, so thanks ...

    Jun 22, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: { Nonexistence }

    hey!! i finally went to your page! i loved this new style of yours, and i think it fits you really well! a few things i thought of when i ...

    Jun 22, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: My Reverie (Part 2 of 2)

    Wow i loved this! you did such a great job here! there's really not much to critique on, just the usual. More description would be nice, maybe make it longer ...

    May 24, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Vampire Love

    Hey I just wanted to say that this whole story has a really great vampire vibe going on. Good job! I love all of your characters. I was really annoyed ...

    May 24, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: .

    I was a little bit disappointed reading this because I really wanted that otherworldly feel you get when you visit another country. You had no visual descriptions of the town ...

    May 24, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Predator and Prey

    Hey there! Wow, I really liked this! You’re ending was especially nice; not many people can make the transformation into insanity as convincing as you did. I didn’t feel like ...

    May 24, 2010
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Shades Of The Heart (Ch1)

    A speck of dust is definitely the most amazing thing in this world. Despite being insignificant and negligible it has the ability to paint the sky blue and the power ...

    May 24, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: My Reverie (Part 1 of 2)

    I LOVE THIS! I don’t really know exactly why, but this was incredible! It’s so cute, and the girl sounds like me :D. I had so much fun reading this, ...

    May 17, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Buddha Cat

    I really loved this! This made me smile at so many parts, and I was completely drawn in on the first sentence. It reminds me so much of MY cat ...

    May 17, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Close, But No Cigar

    Hey there! Just wanted to say that i loved this, thought you wrote this really well, and it was very entertaining. I would love to see more of your work! ...

    May 17, 2010


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