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The sun was peeking through my bedroom window when I woke up to seven a.m. It was a supposed to be (supposed to be a) wonderful Saturday morning until I ...

I’m (I was) pretty relieved when I got to school looking perfectly normal. If I met someone new, I knew that he wouldn’t suspect a thing about my recent misfortunes. ...

I can’t believe this! Do you remember a time when you wished the whole world except you stood still and you’d put things where you’d want them to be? Or ...

I hear my phone ringing in the background of my overwhelmed mind; With a struggle, I pull myself back to the present to answer it. "Hello," I say way too ...

It wasn’t that long ago when I moved to Maine with my father. Back at my old home in New York, my mom had gotten a promotion to her already ...

wow, talk about a late review!!! I had this done a while ago when you reviewed mine, but when i came back to thte page it said 'under construction' and ...

I really liked this. It told a story in just four stanzas that was really powerful. And I absolutely love your title! :D

Three days later, I had made it out of the Omosede Forest. A wide expanse of lush grasslands now lay ahead of me, and I could see the sky clearly ...

SecretM! Hey! :) She sat. Or rather sat on her feet. Chrissie was on top of a two story building, waiting for the target. Her red, wavy, messy hair blowing ...

Hey CO! :D The gentle whisper of waves brushing past, the cold glow of the moon dimly lighting the world around me, around us. No life surrounding us to make ...

Hi Kamas!! :) Well honestly I was really confused by this. I think you're talking about how you've parted from innocence. The poem recalls moments you spent with innocence, like ...

BrainBloom, this was awesome! I could really feel your emotions throughout this whole piece and i couldn't stop reading. I think a lot of people, including me, can relate to ...

I loved it! I doodle all the time, but that's pretty much the extent of my artistic talents xD. I thought this was very interesting and i especially loved the ...

Wow, I really loved reading this! I actually loved how you set it up with the lines and the extra dots :) My only complaint is that the last stanza ...

Yea, i really loved this! It covered a lot of points people have about God without getting too long or extensive about it, which i really liked :D. This subject ...