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Neither of us bothered to start up another conversation, so after a few more minutes of awkward silence I reclined my chair as far back as it would go and ...

Hey nightowl! I was wondering if you could review the first three chapters of my General Fiction novel Eylse? I'm worried that they might be too cliche or boring. I ...

Hi!! I'd love if you reviewed the first three chapters of my General Fiction novel, Elyse. I could really use a second opinion :) Here you go: Ch.1 Ch.2 Ch.3 ...

Hi Rachael! I usually don't go for this type of writing (long descriptions tend to bore me) but I have to admit I really loved what you wrote. The third ...

“I assure you I will be fine sheriff,” I said and left the house and went back into the stables, to find Nightshade and the horse I had ridden home ...

“There’s nothing to talk about,” Zachary answered Shirley’s question. You should just say ‘Zachary answered’ because we know he was answering Shirley. Shirley played with her dyed, bright

I woke up the next morning at 9:00a.m. to my alarm. After I reached over to shut it off, I rubbed my eyes groggily, and groaned. I was still so ...

It was the morning of the fifth day. Squalls of cool wind gave me liberation from the sweltering heat of midday. The air was clean and clear, mimicking the pure ...

I think this went a little slow, but it’s still the beginning and you are probably setting this up for something. To me it wasn’t as interesting as your first ...

“But what if the bind me up and I can’t yell?” they “Someone will know,” Robin assured me. “You won’t be alone.” I nodded in reply and turned, but Robin ...

“Because…” here it went. I would tell him that I was really Ivy and that I had runaway from home because of a stupid dream and how I was really ...

with smaller steels poles circling the tent. Steel poles In the center of the dirt stage was a figure juggling three incandescent torches, burning. If the torches are incandescent, then ...

Rosa's Life Rosa walked out her apartment. She preferred walking to work while the guys who worked with her liked showing of their cars. Well boys will be boys. Then ...

Chapter 1 Silently following the small group of riders, I remained a good distance away. As the night closed in around me I wouldn’t have to worry about the distance ...

No problem :D Oh, and could you send me a PM once you've posted the next parts?