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  • Fantasy Novels Re: Among The Weak

    Hiya! My body ached all over, but regardless I just kept running. I didn't know what was following me comma but from the glimpse that I caught of it the ...

    Jan 6, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Boy 1

    So this is my first art upload! Not my best, but I'm having a little trouble converting some of my pics so this is all I've got for now. :) ...

    Jan 6, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Vanish - Chapter 1

    Hiya! A sly smile drew on her face as the unfortunate man's yellings faded behind her, and as she tucked her newfound wealth beneath her cloak while squeezing it in ...

    Jan 6, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Nightfall Chapter One (Pt. 1)

    Hiya Kladi! :D Tiny particles danced around her in the light as her silvery-blue flank rose and fell heavily .Particles of what? You should explain. Dust, water, dirt... Overall, a ...

    Jan 6, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Winter Chapter 1

    Hey there :D Amazing job, really! You have a wonderful way of describing things that is so original. Your pace is slow, and I actually really like it. I don’t ...

    Jan 4, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Forget Me Not: Chapter One

    Hiya The brute turned his head, not moving his feet. He was trying not to display a weakness, Aleck assumed; but that was as good as broadcasting it. His vision ...

    Jan 4, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Forget Me Not: Prologue

    Hey there! :) Some of the other reviewers said they were confused by this, but that wasn’t the case for me. If I’m getting it right, she’s being held hostage ...

    Jan 4, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Prologue/Chapter 1

    Hi there! Welcome to YWS :) My story involves the group of 9, and proves just how oblivious humans are to what really happens in this magnificent world. I didn’t ...

    Jan 4, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Separated

    This was quite short; I think you could’ve added another page or so to this introduction. It’s hard to critique something that hasn’t even had enough time to really get ...

    Jan 4, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Stargazer {part 4}

    Hey :) I hope you don't mind a longer review this time. I figure since we're nearing the end of the story I can start making more comments about it ...

    Jan 4, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: the stargazer {PART 3}

    Onto part 3! :) It was a dream, only a dream. He thought, urging himself to believe it. there should be a commas after dream, not a period. An hour ...

    Dec 31, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: When the Sand Runs Out (Chapter One - Katie)

    Hey there, sorry for being so late to your request! I can tell you put a LOT of thought into this, so I will be as honest and helpful as ...

    Dec 31, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Jackelyn

    very nice. The second and third ones are my favorite, mostly because I love how the highlight in her hair pops. In the pics of her eyes, the area around ...

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: White Witch

    Fantastic job, really! Very creative, I really love the use of beads and textures to create this. The blue tint is very pretty. :)

    Dec 30, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Deleted

    I just had to come back for more XD Her features were sharp and cat-like, her eyes cunning and intelligent. Her hair, white as a lamb's fleece, was cropped short ...

    Dec 30, 2010


What really knocks me out is a book that, when you're all done reading it, you wish the author that wrote it was a terrific friend of yours and you could call him up on the phone whenever you felt like it. That doesn't happen much, though.
— J.D. Salinger, The Catcher in the Rye