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I found myself almost dragging my feet once lunch time rolled around. Picking up my backpack, I looked over at the open classroom door. Over it sounds like you repeat ...

Just because she's a princess... Doesn't mean she'll go without a fight So this is one of my favorite drawings :) I relied a lot on references for the pose ...

Chapter 5!! Woohoo! Vanessa eyed him with intrigue, like a child seeing the sun for the very first time. He was by all means, beautiful, flawlessly beautiful. His face was ...

“It is easier for a camel to go through the eye of a needle, than for a rich man to enter the kingdom of God” Again, like I’ve mentioned in ...

Hey-O. Glad to see you're writing more :) I'll try to be as helpful as I can! Weeping may endure for a night, but joy cometh in the morning. Psalms ...

... The cattle had frozen to death, probably during the night. Louis looked over their scrawny carcasses. It was a wonder that they had survived to adulthood. He raised his ...

Gah! I'm falling to far behind in this story! Anyways, onto the review. So I liked this version much more than your other one. All in all, it just had ...

I skimmed through it again, and wow, great job with adding description. It's exactly what I was talking about! Keep it up! I'll get to part 2 asap :)

Thanks, guys :D I've been working a ton on getting clothes/body proportions right after getting these comments. It's definitely a weak area for me. Thanks so much for reviewing, it ...

Actually, I kind of wanted him to have messy hair and a baggy sweater. Detail would definately help though, thanks for pointing it out :D

Thanks for the advice ^_^ I'll defninately keep that in mind. I should've put more thought into his clothes, I mainly just focused on his face.

I really like the design, and the colors look cool :) The only thing that irks me- just a little bit- is the eyebrows. They look too small and come ...

aww thanks! My drawings usually have an anime/manga look to them, maybe that's why the porportions seem a bit unrealistic (I'll have to work on that! xD) And I was ...

Hiya! :D I really like this so far. It was very smooth from beginning to end; I didn’t get bored, and I wasn’t distracted by bad grammar or anything, so ...

Hiya! “What do you mean, ‘they escaped?’” Mr. Collins’ eyes grew wide. IT would be easier to read if you wrote dialogue tags. It was confusing for the first bit ...